Friday, August 03, 2007

Hmm...

Humans...!

We are either only apathic

or Padentic;

the ones who reside in the centre

are dead.

1 comment:

Unknown said...

Short and raw. Leaves reader with a finality (with last line) Don't confuse lay-readers (I mean just your average reader) with big words (ie apathic or padentic - I don't know what these mean?). Does have a rhythm to it.